Showing posts with label Tenses. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Tenses. Show all posts

Monday, 3 December 2012

Exploring the Past by Degrees

Without getting too metaphysical and going way beyond my pay grade, we experience time in a number of different ways. How we relate to the present differs from how we relate to the recent or even the distant past, and all the way stations in between have their own subtle distinctions. As writers we can express these through the tenses we select.
Here are some of the ones we commonly use:
  • Present: I write
  • Present Continuous: I am writing
  • Simple Past: I wrote
  • Past Imperfect: I was writing
  • Past Perfect: I have written
  • Pluperfect: I had written
  • Conditional: I would write 
  • Conditional Perfect: I would have written
  • Future Perfect: I will have written
In these examples the present is condensed and authoritative: I write – it's a statement of fact, whereas the present continuous I am writing sounds a little more hesitant and open-ended. The real nuances start to make themselves felt when you venture back in time. I wrote is direct and straightforward, but I was writing is somehow more suggestive: I was writing... (and then something happened to stop me?) I have written sounds emphatic, taking three words to hammer the message home. I had written takes you farther back still. It's a dead tense, an inaccessible one and I don't like it at all. I would write  sounds like someone hedging their bets - I would write but... but... but - it's an uncomfortable tense, a mitigating tense, but it's not quite so hand-wringing as the conditional perfect – I would have written (but it's too late now.) The future perfect sounds wonderfully organised and efficient, redolent of forward planning: I will have written. It's self assured in a way that the imperfect never can be.
Try substituting different verbs: I would have loved, I was hurting, I rejoice, and you start to see what a crucial contribution the choice of tense makes to what you are trying to convey. Choose wisely and you will have done yourself (!) a great favour.

Thursday, 10 March 2011

I'm Feeling Extraordinarily TENSE at the Moment...

I'm tense about tenses. I'm always amazed at how many students submit work without first having a rigorous look at the tenses they are using: they wander, they meander, they double back, they go shooting forward and for a reader it can be extremely discombobulating.

If you are telling a story in the present tense, stick with it, unless you are writing passages of flashback.  If you are writing in the past, don't go drifting into the present.  Verbs are the spinal column in the body of your work, they are the architecture that holds a story together.  A good verb, well chosen, is an extraordinarily dynamic device, so make sure that you do them (and the story you are telling) full justice by putting them in the right tense.

Here's a consciousness-raising exercise you might like to try: write a story in the present tense, then rewrite it in a past tense and compare the effects.  It might help you to be more tense -- aware.  Write consistently: nothing in your work should be inadvertent.